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About Marco's accent, here's a rough idea on how he'd sound like. Go to here: [link], and watch between the 7:53 and 9:07 timemarks of the video. Much of Marco's dialogue is inspired by this video link.
Update!
I have made a form about my series. I made it in order to get some input into my new story series. I can't wait to get some answers!
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Link to the form: [link] .
Update!I have made a form about my series. I made it in order to get some input into my new story series. I can't wait to get some answers!
!Link to the form: [link] .
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So I've read your story. I actually enjoyed it quite a lot, it was a different take with Sonic actually being affectionate back towards Amy. I found it cute, and somewhat innocent. He seemed to accept Amy's forwardness due to the particular special day. As for Amy jr and moe I found that to be the most enjoyable part to read, it was something different and you did a great job at it. Bringing all new characters into it. Moe's character is completely the opposite of his father I liked that. He had a sense of kindness and non judgement, really sweet. You should do more stories on Amy jr and Moe.
Now onto what you should change, the guy with the scottish accent. I found the words too jumbled, yes he has an accent, but in real if it is not portrayed as that. Well I should know because the Briish and Scottish live not far part from eachother. (Me being British). That part I would change, it was just a little too much, but other international people might disagree. Well ones that don't understand.
Sorry I am unable to critique, it won't allow me to write in the box. I hope this is helpful and satisyfing enough.
Good job, if you want more comments don't hesitate to ask. Sorry again I can't critique.
Now onto what you should change, the guy with the scottish accent. I found the words too jumbled, yes he has an accent, but in real if it is not portrayed as that. Well I should know because the Briish and Scottish live not far part from eachother. (Me being British). That part I would change, it was just a little too much, but other international people might disagree. Well ones that don't understand.
Sorry I am unable to critique, it won't allow me to write in the box. I hope this is helpful and satisyfing enough.
Good job, if you want more comments don't hesitate to ask. Sorry again I can't critique.